Make a recount about your Holiday for the last semester. You should consider some guidelines as follows:
Orientation: provides the reader with background
information needed to understand the text (i.e. who was involved, where it
happened, when it happened).
Event(s): series of events
typically ordered in a chronological sequence.
Re-orientation: may take the form of a summary statement and
/ or an evaluative comment and / or a return to the starting point.
Make your recount at least for 3 (three) paragraph and 150 words consisting the above guidelines. Write them in the comment of box below. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you so much for your attention.
On the last holiday, my family and I went to Jakarta to celebrate the new year. My family and I stayed in Sultan hotel for two days. Sultan hotel situated in Senayan. We enjoyed the scenery from the window’s hotel. We could see the Gelora Bung Karno. How beautiful it is. Right ?
ReplyDeleteFirst day, after we got a breakfast, we were back to our room and prepared to go to the circus show. The circus show was near from the hotel that we stayed., so, we went there by foot. The circus show started from 11 A.M until 1 P.M. It was amazing show.
We had lunch in “Kopi luwak” in Grand Indonesia. Grand Indonesia is a mall that situated in Bunderan HI. Not too far from the hotel. We went there by car. After lunch, we watch the film in Blitz Megaplex. We watched Alvin and The Chipmunk 3, then we went back to hotel because the day was night.
The last night in 2011, i waited 2012. During waiting 00:00, i chatted with my friend on facebook. We chatted until 1 AM., after I said Happy New Year to my friend, i slept until tomorrow. I was too sleepy.
We went to Dufan on the second day. We enjoyed the games there. After lunch in Bandar Jakarta, we went back to home. We were very glad, and we never ever forget this vacation.
Name : Resti Fortuna Maturasi
DeleteGrade : 8
SMPN 1 KOTA SERANG
Name: Asri Catur Rosita
DeleteClass: 8
SMPN 1 SERANG CITY
-To celebrate the new year.
That should be:To celebrated the new year.
-We could see the Gelora Bung Karno
That should be:We were see/we saw the Gelora Bung Karno
-There by foot
That should be:There on foot.
-That situated in Bunderan HI
That should be:That situate in Bunderan HI
-During waiting 00:00
That should be:During waited 00:00
-I was too sleepy
That should be:I was so sleepy
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ReplyDeleteName : Alifa Rizky Nur’aeni
ReplyDeleteClass : VIII
School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
UNFORGETABLE HOLIDAY
Last new year holiday, my family (Mother, Father, and Sister) and I went to Cisarua, Puncak, Bogor. We went there by car that droven by my father. We left home on Thursday night at 8.00 pm.
In the journey, we sang together, drank and ate some snacks and drinks, until slept (except my father, because he drove our car, and we will got an accident if he slept, hehehe). We took a rest for a moment in the rest area not far from Toll Gate Jagorawi. After that, we continued our journey to Cisarua,Puncak, Bogor.
We arrived in the Villa at 12.00 night. After we dropped out our backpack, we were sleep. Then, we got up in the morning and felt fresh. We walked around and had breakfast before enjoyed any recreation object. After we finished breakfast, we tried to play “Rafting”. We took the 4km Rafting. After we got any instructions, we started our adventure.
In the middle of our adventure, we saw the people who live In the riverside. Beside that, we saw their activities, such as fishing, until took a bath. We arrived at the finish line until 2hours toured the river. Then we went back to the villa.
In the afternoon, we walked around again in that recreation park. We played some recreations object, such as water bike, inflatable boat, and etc. We enjoyed our holiday.
In the last day, after had breakfast and bought any souvenirs, we continued our holiday to Garut. We arrived in Garut at 4.00 pm. Guess what happened, we depleted of the hotel!!! It was awful. I don’t know what to say. But then my father looked for a hotel for us. Fiuuh, finally we got a hotel. We stayed at Garut for 2 days and then went back to Serang after bought any “Dodol”and “Dorokdok” (Foods made from cowhide or Buffalo) or we called it “kerupuk kulit”.
That’s our unforgetable holiday. From enjoyed Rafting, played any recreations objects, until depleted of the Hotel. Sadness and happiness were happen.
Name : Kintan Septa Sari
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School:SMPN 1 KOTA SERANG
I don’t know what to say.
it should be: I didn't know what to said.
Name : Indria Yustisi Noviani
ReplyDeleteClass: 8
School : SMP Negeri 1 kota Serang
One week before new year I and my mom went to supermarket to bought some stuff to grill. I and my mom bought one pack of coal, a roaster and a nipper. We was make a list to do in new year night, in new year night we wont to grill chicken, fish, squid, and shrimp and then we wont to made a campfire. The next day, 5 day before new year i went to the barber shop for creambath I felt relax. After creambath at barber shop I went to the supermarket again to bought some snack for new year night, I bought many snack for new year night.
4 days before new years I get sick my foot become red and swollen , I can’t walk ! it felt hurt so, I went to the doctor to ask why my foot became like this. When I in the doctor the doctor say, “this is because bacteri, the bacteri hurt you from your body. I will give you a medicine for make your foot become normal again and to reduce your hurt”.
I had consume the medicine one night and felt well but I still can’t walk so I went to the doctor again next day. In the next day the doctor ask me to slept in the hospital for a days. But, when the days 2 came I still sick and can’t walk so I stayed one night again in the hospital. I was sad because, when I stayed one night again in the hospital it was new year night all list that I had make with my mom is canceled!. I was felt very sad, this is bad new year I ever had.
THE END.
-I can't walk -> I can't walked
Delete-The bacteri hurt your body -> The bacterial hurt yourbody
-I had consume the medicine -> I had consumed the medicine
- This is because bacteri -> This is because bacterial
Name :Astried Naomi
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School:SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
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Visiting Singapore
Last holiday,I and my family went to Singapore.I went there by airplane.I took there around 2 hours.In the airplane I saw fields, settlement, skyscrapers, etc.
After we arrived in changi airport,we immediately shocked by the situation there.It was very different with Indonesia.
In Indonesia,we saw many slum house,but In Singapore there were not slum house,but there were many skyscrapers.There were also no visible trash scattered.Then we had a lunch in a famous restaurant.After lunch,we continue our trip to sentosa island.
In sentosa island,the weather was good for my holiday and there were so amazing
There,I saw a merlion.Merlion was a statue which has head liked a lion but merlion’s body liked a fish.Merlion can spout a water.
It was very tall,around 8,6 meter and very heavy around 70 ton.Waw,it was so amazing,right?
There were,I also saw a show in song of the sea.It was very very very amazing.
The next day was my last in Singapore.Because we were tired,we just took a rest in hotel.although we took a rest,but at the hotel we played games,such as play a bike,swim,and others.
It was a wonderful holiday because it was the first time I went to Singapore.Although it was pretty quick,it was wonderful to visit Singapore.
Name:Rania Ari Puspita
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School: Smpn 1 Serang City
After luch, we continue our trip to Sentosa Island.
It should be: After luch, we continued our trip to Sentosa Island.
Name : Nindya Syafa Adiningtyas
ReplyDeleteGrade : V111
School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
Last year, my family and my cousins had trip to Anyer. At night, my mother and my aunt, Aunt Nining made plan to went to Anyer with all my cousins. My mother tell to us, and we are agree.
On the morning, at five o’clock, we prepare all we need. Clothes, food, etc. My mom is tought the food is most important thing because bought food at Anyer is rather expensive. At half past six, my family pick up my cousins (Lintang, Fafa, Fifi, Timur, Tio). Are you think its became a fun trip ?
Arrived at Anyer, we found the place that there is no sunshine anymore. After that, my father let all cousins to play water on the beach first, then we can ate. Me, my sister, and cousins change our clothes. It’s time for us to swam !!!!! My cousins, me and my sister walked to coral in the side of the beach. Wow, the wave was big and high ! My sister and my mother always remind all for attentive. Beside play water, we took picture went wave came. Very happy and enjoy ! My little cousin, Lintang looked very happy. We had fun together.
After play water and took picture, all chidrens change wet clothes. We are had cold, but it was fun. Then, we ate supplies food my mother and my aunt bring, there is rice of course, side dishes, such as, fry fish, chicken, vegetables, mineral water etc. My father bought ice coconut drink. It was very yummy ! We ate and sometimes laugh and chat.
After satisfaction, we back to home. Do you know what I think about this trip?
It was exciting trip forever !!!
THE END
Name : Haris Abdul Aziz
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1. We are agree
it should be : We were agree
2. My mom thought the food is most important
it should be : my mom was thought the food was most important
3. Beside play water
it should be : beside played water
4. My mother and my aunt bring
it should be : My mother and my aunt bought
5. all children's change wet clothes
it should be : all childrens changed wet clothes
Name : PUTRI SEPTIANINGSIH
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : SMPN 1 KOTA SERANG
MY JOURNEY
Last Wednesday on June 29th 2011, my mother and I went to “LEBAK BULUS” field in Jakarta, my mother and i went to “LEBAK BULUS” field with “HIZBUT TAHRIR INDONESIA”, one of Islam organization, we went there by a bus to commemorated Hijriyah’s new year.
Before my mother and I went to “LEBAK BULUS” field, my mother, my mother’s partner in “MAJELIS TAKLIM” and I gathering in “MASJID AGUNG SERANG” at 04.30 am to join with HTI’s member in Banten province.
We went there after pray subuh at 05.30 am, in our journey we got instructions for presently program in “LEBAK BULUS” field.
We arrived around “LEBAK BULUS” field at 07.30 am, but we arrived not in the real place, we left bus because the situation of the way was very and very stopped, we walked from traffic light until “LEBAK BULUS” field, it was enough long distance, and then we arrived in “LEBAK BULUS” field.
After that, we enter the field, we know as participants, so…… we was get snack, hat, and paper from the committee.
And then we was join the process of program very well.
Next, after followed the program we went back to parking area and went to “MASJID AGUNG SERANG “. But …..the journey went to “MASJID AGUNG SERANG “. I felt it more needed long time than went to “LEBAK BULUS” field, it caused the journey was obstruction with traffic’s stopped.
The trip to “MASJID AGUNG SERANG “ started at 03.00 pm until 06.00 pm ( wow …. It was so long time guys :D ) .
we arrived “MASJID AGUNG SERANG “, but my mother, one of my mother’s partner and I indirectly come home but we were ate the meatball, after that we went to home by general transportation .
It was tired but it is so funny holiday for me
THE END~
Name : Marco Reynaldi
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Comment: We went there after pray subuh at 05.30 am,....
it should, we went there after prayed subuh at 05.30 am,....
Name : Rifki Andriansyah Akram
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
Journey to Ciamis
Last holiday I went to ciamis to visited my Grandmother with my family, we went there on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 at 05.00 p.m and we arrived there at 00.00 a.m on the way we rested twice. After we arrived, we went straight slept. After I woke up I took a bath and then I with my family ate breakfast together.
At lunchtime I and my family grilled fishes, we ate lunch together until 02.00 p.m and then we prayed together, after it we gathered with my Grandmother until 03.30 p.m and then we prayed, at 04.00 p.m my uncle took me to followed him to fishing at ‘ciereng’ river, and my uncle also took my cousin to followed us.
At river we fishing the little fish and we got many fish until the rain down and we rested at hut near the river until the rain stopped, after it we continued fishing until we got many of little fish again. Suddenly, the rain down again but it was heavy rain and we decided for went back to grandma’s house, at there we fried the fish and we ate it together. Then I took a bath at 06.00 p.m and then I prayed with my family, after it we gathered and laughed with my family until 09.00 p.m then we prayed again, after that we went to slept.
Next day, we went back to home at 07.00 a.m and we arrived at 04.00 p.m, after we arrived I went to slept again. That my great holiday, I can’t forgot that holiday.
1. Last holiday I went to ciamis to visited my Grandmother with my family
Delete--> last holiday I went to ciamis to visit my grandmother with my family
2. and then I with my family ate breakfast together.
--> and then my family and I ate breakfast together
3. At lunchtime I and my family grilled fishes
--> at lunchtime my family and I grilled fish
4. at 04.00 p.m my uncle took me to followed him to fishing
--> at 04.00 p.m my uncle took me to follow him to go fishing
5. and my uncle also took my cousin to followed us.
--> and my uncle also took my cousin to follow us
6. At river we fishing the little fish and we got many fish until the rain down and we rested at hut near the river until the rain stopped
--> at the river we caught so many little fish until the rain poured down...
7. Suddenly, the rain down again
--> suddenly the rain poured down again
8. we decided for went back
--> we decided to go back
9. after that we went to slept.
--> after that we went to sleep
10. I went to slept again
--> I went to sleep again
11. That my great holiday, I can’t forgot that holiday.
--> that was my great holiday. I can't forget that holiday
12. After we arrived, we went straight slept
--> after we arrived, we went to sleep directly
maybe that's it :)
Name :Nurina Almira
ReplyDeleteClass :8B
School :SMPN 1 KOTA SERANG
Last Holiday, I and my family went to Singapore. I went there by airplane in the morning. It took abaout 2 hours to got there. When we were on the airplane, I can saw a large sea.
When we were arrive at changi airport at singapore, we took a taxi to went to our hotel, when we were on the taxi , I saw the steet was so clean, many people walk, and the weather was so clean, there was only a few who use vehicles. When we arrived at our hotel, the lobby was so clean, the people there was so nice, even I got a new friend name angela, she was so beautiful, her room was beside my room. She said, she was from america,she was there to accompany her dad , her dad has something to do. Thats to bad, then I asked my dad to invite Angela in our holiday and my dad say yes, so angela went out with us.
On our first day, we went to see Merlion statue, to took some photo there. Merlion was a statue that has head like a lion but the body lika a fish.that was amazing! we use bus to get there. When we arrived there , so many tourist there to took some photo,luckly I can took some photos there, with my sister, my mom, even with Angela.
Our next day is wne to sentosa island, this island is close to batam. This island was simmilar with ancol at Jakarta. Many tourist visits the beach there. The beach there was so clean and charm. I and Angela played many game there, it was so excited.
At our last day, we only took a rest at hotel, but I play with Angela in her room.
Next day was time to us to went home, I sad should separated with Angela, but We were promise to replay message. But, it was my wonderful holiday, I hope I can went to Singapore again and met Angela.
name : Ardelia Yolanda S
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SMPN 1 SERANG
-many people walk, it should be *many people walked*
-I asked my dad to invite Angela in our holiday and my dad say yes, it should be *I asked my dad to invited Angela in our holiday and my dad said yes*
-Merlion was a statue that has head like a lion but the body lika a fish, it should be *Merlion was a statue that had head like a lion but the body lika a fish*
-Our next day is wne to sentosa island, it should be *Our next day was went to sentosa island*
-I play with Angela in her room it should be *I played with Angela in her room*
Name : HARIS ABDUL AZIZ
ReplyDeleteGrade : V III
School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
JOURNEY TO SOLO
Last holiday on June 2011 my destination was to my grandmother’s house. I went to Solo with my family(my mother,my father,my brother,my sister, and my cousin. I went to Solo at 01.00 pm on Monday, 13rd June 2011 and we arrived at 03.00 am on Tuesday, 14th June 2011.
On Wednesday, 15th June 2011 I my brother, and my cousin went to played futsal in Grand Futsal. After played futsal I went to waterfall TawangMangu with my brother and my cousin it was beautiful view and very cool.
On Thursday, 16th June 2011 I went to restaurant ‘sate Pak Mahmud’ with my family, I ordered goat satay,tongseng, and ice tea, I was really fulfilled after ate that food. After it I went to Klewer market and Gede market to bought souvenir, and tradisional snack.
On Friday, 17th June 2011 I with my family went to Prambanan Temple. Then I went to Malioboro to bought souvenir and Bakpia. After it I went to my grandmother’s house.
On Saturday, 18th June I and my family back home to Serang at 01.00 pm and we arrived at 05.00 am on Sunday, 19th June 2011. The journey made me so happy.
name : Nindya Syafa Adiningtyas
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comment :
1. Last holiday on June 2011 my destination was to my grandmother’s house --> Last holiday on June 2011, I had journey to gradmother's house
2. 13rd June 2011 and we arrived at 03.00 am on Tuesday, 14th June 2011 ---> June 13rd 2011 and we arrived at 03.00 am on Tuesday, June 14th 2011
3. I my brother, and my cousin went to played futsal in Grand Futsal ---> I, my brother, and my cousin went to Grand Futsal for played futsal
3. After it I went to Klewer market and Gede market ---> After that, I went to Klewer market and Gede market
4. After it I went to my grandmother’s house ---> After that, I back to my grandmother's house
5. I and my family back home to Serang ---> I and my family bak to to home at Seang .
Name : Aissya Jelitawati
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : 1 JHS Serang City
My Bad Experiences
Yesterday, on Sunday morning, I was wake up and looked at the clock. Oh my God! It was 09:30 AM, and I must go to my friend’s house at 10:00 AM for working group! I was very shocked, and immediately I went out from my room and ran quickly trough the bathroom. After I took a bath, I prepared myself and went to dining room to ask my mother that I had to go to my friend’s house.
My mother said that it was better if I had to breakfast first before I went to my friend’s house. Because of I was in a hurry, so I did not have time for breakfast.
I went out from my house, and then I ran towards my house gate. Something happened. I slipped on a banana skin and fell into the ditch. Oh! My shoes, my clothes and my bag were wet! They were very dirty and smelly! Aarrgh!
Then, I saw my father went out. He looked my condition. I thought he would angry to me. In fact, he laughed at me and took me came back to house.
Because of that incident, I had some pains in my legs and my arms. I could not go to my friend’s house. So, I sent a Short Message Service or SMS to her. A minute later, I received the answer message from her. The message was: “I’m sorry... I forget to tell you that the working group did not be held because I have some business with my family. I’m so sorry…”
After I read the message, I felt very annoyed. But, I could not do anything. I could only spend my weekend in my bedroom. Huuuh!
i think
Delete- i must go to my friend's house "it should be" i must went to my friend's house
- I’m sorry... I forget to tell you that the working group did not be held because I have some business with my family. I’m so sorry "IT SHOULD BE" I’m sorry... I forget to tell you that the working group doesn't be held because i have some business with my family i'm so sorry
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ReplyDeleteName : Septyana Dwi Ernaida
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : 1 Junior High School Serang City
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MY HOLIDAY IN BALI
Last holiday,my family and I went to Bali. We’re visited in Bali for three days. We packing our self before went to Bali. We not forget for prayer before went to Bali. We hope God gave safety during the trip.
As we arrived in Bali,it was midnight. We check in to Sadewa hotel near the Kuta beach. The hotel was very excited. The room of the hotel that we stayed was very clean,big and beautiful. After see the hotel,I think it was my wonderful holiday. We sleep before because it was midnight. I think,my adventure will be began tomorrow.
First day,my family and I visited the Kuta beach. We had swimming,surfing,diving,played the sand and played the another water sport. We had lunch in the restaurant. We ate the fried rice with fried chicken. The drink was orange juice. It was very delicious. I to taste my food and drink. In the evening we had sunset in the Kuta beach. It was very beautiful. After that we’re back to the hotel.
Second day,we went to Tanah Lot and Ubud. In Tanah Lot we met with my father’s friend. He visited Bali with his family too. We went to Ubud together with my father’s friend. We had lunch together in the restaurant that placed in the beach side. We ate “ayam betutu” was traditional food of Bali. And we drink “es kuwut” was the traditional drink of Bali. Wow! It very delicious. After that we went to Sangeh beach. We just walked around the beach. Then we’re back to the hotel.
Last day,we went to souvenir market. We bought some clothes and some another souvenir. My sister and I bought some girly clothes. We said that because the clothes colorful of pink. My brother bought toy car. In the afternoon,we check out from hotel. Then we’re back home brought some memories of Bali.
Name:Ridho Rivaldo
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Comment: The word "drink" it should be "drank
Name : Stefani Zahro
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : 1 Junior High School Serang City
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My Holiday to Medan
Hello! My name is Stefani. On August 2011, I went to Medan with my family. We went to Medan by ship. For 3 days on the ship, I just slept, open fasting praying, bathing, and around the ship. I can not patient to met my brothers and sisters in Medan. Arrived at Medan, I was picked up by my Uncle. We went to the Uncle’s house was located in Perbaungan. Arrived at Uncle’s house, I took my bag. Then, I went to bedroom for slept.
First day, I woke up early for pray “Idul Fitri” in Mosque. After that, we went to home. Arrived in home, we ate together. Then, my family and me greetings with tears and remorse for having faults that intentional or unintentional.
Second day, I went to Grandma’s house in Pancur Batu. Tomorrow my family and me went back to Serang because on 5th September 2011 my parents and my elder sister started working. Finally we returned to Serang by ship again.
saras :my family and me it should be(i and my family)
DeleteNot i and my family, but MY FAMILY AND I
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HOLIDAY IN BANDUNG
Last year , I went to Bandung with my family , Bandung famous as known as the city of “PARIS VAN JAVA” . so my family interest for that . we went by car take for 5 hours In the trip for Bandung I just ate some food and drunk , after arrive in Bandung , my family and I , direct to hotel . there , my family and I , relax our body in bed room ,
Tomorrow , my family and I , went to outlet to shopped in “RUMAH MODE” , after shopped , my family and I, direct to the center of food in Bandung . after ate any kind food . we went to “KAWAH PUTIH” in Lembang . there , my family and I picked many strawberry . After satisfied , my family and I, went to “SARI ATER “ for swam warm water , because my family and I was tired. So , we went back to hotel . there , my parents were slept in bed room , but my brother and I , played , watched television and enjoyed the food . after my stomach full , my brother and I slept together .
Last day , my family and I , woke up early for packed and check out in hotel , after packed we had a breakfast . and then my family and I prepare our self to went back to my home in Serang. my family and I, was very happy for holiday in Bandung .
Name: Aissya Jelitawati
DeleteClass: VIII
School: 1 JHS Serang City
Comment:
I think...
-“...for swam warm water” should be “...to swam in warm water”
-“...to the center of food...” should be “...to the food court...
-“Tomorrow, my family... should be “Next day, my family...”
-“...ate some food and drunk” should be “...ate some food and drink”
-“In the trip for Bandung” should be “In the trip to Bandung”
-“My family interest for that” should be “My family interested for that”
-“I just ate some food and drunk” should be “I just ate some food and drink”
-“After arrive in Bandung” should be “After arrived in Bandung”
-“Direct to hotel” should be “directed to hotel”
-“Relax our body in bed room” should be “relaxed our body in bedroom”
-“Direct to the center...” should be “Directed to center...”
-“My parents were slept in bed room” should be “My parents slept in bedroom”
-“After my stomach full” should be “After my stomach was full”
-“...and check out in hotel” should be “...and checked out from hotel”
-“...and I prepare our self...” should be “...and I prepared ourselves...”
Thank You!
Name :NurlindaPuspaUtamiPutri
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
Bad Wednesday
On last Wednesday, January 18th 2012 is my really bad day. Do you know why?
First, on that day, I woke up lately. When I opened my eyes the time was shows at 06.15 AM. I was hurry up for take a bath, breakfast and prepare to go to the school. As soon as I arrived, my counselor teacher was wait on the gate. Okay, I was late and I punished. After I cleared my punishment. I entered my class.
Second, in the class, my teacher was angry to me causeIcame late.
Third, on second lesson(social science), I was forget to bring my homework. So I got a teacher angry again and I Punished AGAIN! My teacher wanted me to stand up in front of the class.
Forth, when I was on the way to home, I fell and make some people who look at me,laughed.Oh My God! It was so EMARRASSED!
Fifth, when I arrived at home, my family was not there. On the table I saw there a message and I read it, arggh.. They were in my grandma house, and my mom didn’t prepare some food for my lunch. Oh I was very hungry that time. I just can waited my family back to home and finally they were came back at 04.00PM and luckly they brought some food..
Ohhh, it was really reallyreally my bad Wednesday ever
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DeleteName : Luriannisya Novanda Putri
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : SMPN 1 KOTA SERANG
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My Holiday To Madiun
Two week ago, I went to Madiun, East Java with my sister, Lili by train. We needed 12 hours to arrived in there. In the journey we enjoyed the view and sometimes we ate some snack we bring from home. We arrived in the Madiun Station at 3 am. My uncle picked up then picked out to my grandma’s house.
In there we went to some place. First day I went to Ngebel, Magetan. In there we can met a big lake. And on the second day I went to Sarangan. In there we can met horse, speed boat, hotels and also lake. In there I enjoyed the view. And in there I ate “Sate Kelinci” It’s very delicious. Four days later I went to “Mirasa” to bought some traditional food to gave to my family in Serang. Oh yeah, every morning in there I and my cousin rode bicycle round village and after that we played badminton.
On the last day I prepared my self for the long journey. At 6 pm I and my sister in the train. 15 minutes later the train leave Madiun Station. In this journey I can’t enjoyed the view because in the outside is night. This holiday very happy, because made my mind fresh for a new semester.
Name : Dena Zahra Aulia
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Comment:
we ate some snack we bring from home (it should be) we ate some snack that we brought from home
we arrived in the Madiun station at 3 a.m (it should be)we were arrived in the Madiun station at 3 a.m
My uncle picked up then picked out to my grandma's house (it should be) My uncle was picked me up and picked me out to my grandma's house.
It's very delicious (it should be ) it was very delicious
There i and my cousin rode bicycle round village (it should be) There i and my cousin rode bicycle arounding the village
This holiday very happy ( it should be ) this holiday was very exciting
Name: Ratu Sofie Azkia Putri
ReplyDeleteGrade: VII
School: SMPN 1 Kota Serang
On The Movie
last month my friends and i went to cinema. Fhira, Maya, Dea , Maudy and Sastiya came to my house. We gathering together at my house. We went to cinema at 11.00 a.m by public transportation, and we arrived in there at 11.45 a.m. in cinema we met Reva and her friends.
We discussed about a film that we watched and we chose a film by Rudi Soedjarwo,” Garuda di Dadaku 2”, after that we bought some ticket. We must waited for a few minutes. To fill it, we were pray dzuhur together, and then we played in the Timezone. After that we back to cinema then we enter to theatre.
2 hours passed, the film was end, the film make me so interested, we felt so hungry and we bought some food and drinks, and we ate together, after that at 04.00 p.m we back to home by public transportation. i felt so tired but it was very happy for me. Thanks to my beloved friends
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-we were pray dzuhur together(it should be) we prayed dzuhur together
-we enter to theatre(it should be) we entered to theatre
-the film make me so interested(it should be) the film made me so interested
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My Holiday in Grandmother’s home.
Four month ago,in Idul Fitri holiday.I went to Magetan,east java.I went to my grandmother’s home with my mother,and two my sisters.I went to my grandmother’s home not with my father because him must worked.I went by bus “Rosalia Indah” Class Super Excecutive.Needed twenty one hours to arrived in my grandmother’s home.In my journey i saw many car,bus and truck.finnaly i and my family arrived in my grandmother’s home,after that i am slept because i am very tired.
In my holiday,I went to many place.those are:Telaga Sarangan,Swimming Pool (Manunggal) and Pos Mode.First i went to telaga sarangan with my mother,my sisters and my uncle by car,in Telaga Sarangan i arrounded telaga sarangan by horse.and ate “Sate Kelinci “ with my family,after that I am and my family back to grandmother’s home.And the next day i am,my nephew and two my sisters went to Swimming pool namely is Manunggal,Manunggal near my grandmother’s home,after arrived in manunggal,i am quickly to changed my costum,and quickly to swam,after swam i am back to grandmother’s home.And after went to Manunggal,i went to Pos mode with my mother,i bought some sandal,and my mother bought some bag,and shoes for her friends.
In my holiday,i am very pleased,because i went to many place,the all of place are very interested.but my holiday is finished and i must come back to Serang.
1.I went to my grandmother’s home not with my father because him must worked,(it should be)I went to my grandmother's house without my father because he must worked.
Delete2.I am slept because I am very tired.(it should be) I slept because i was very tired.
3.after that I am and my family back to grandmother’s home,(it should be)after that my family and I back to grandmother's house.
4.i am quickly to changed my costum,(it should be)I changed my costum quickly.
Name: Reva Anggita Sari
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School: SMPN 1 Kota Serang
ON THE MOVIE
On Monday, my friends and i went to cinema. We gathering at Bunderan, Ciceri. At 10.30 a.m we went to cinema and arrived at 11.30 a.m. in cinema, we met Sofi and her friends then, we discussed about a film that we watched and we chose a film by Rudi Soedjarwo, “Garuda Di Dadaku 2”. After that, we bought tickets.
We must waited for a few minutes. To fill it, we played the games in the timezone. We bought coins and we played together. There, so many games are interest and we chose a percussion games. After that, we back to cinema then, we enter to theatre.
2 hours passed, the film was end. “Garuda Di Dadaku 2” is a good film to watched. It was make me so sad. After that, we were hungry and we found some food and drinks. Before we back to home, we went to bookstore, we bought a gift for my friend. Then, at 4.00 p.m we back to home by public transportation. Thanks to my beloved friends
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Comment:we discussed about a film that we watched it should be we discussed about a film that we wanted to watch.
It was make me so sad it should be it made me so sad.
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Holiday in Jogjakarta
2 years ago, my family and I went to Jogjakarta. We went to Jogjakarta at 06.00 a.m. by my father car and we arrived at 06.00 p.m. As soon we arrived, we went to my uncle house.
After we arrived at my uncle house we went straight slept. After I woke up in the morning, I took a bath and after it, I and my family breakfast. After it, my family and I went to Borobudur temple at 10.00 a.m. by car and arrived around 10.30 p.m.
After we arrived, we saw many people there. The Borobudur temple is very big. After we are recreation, we ate some food such as gudeg, bakpia and etc. After ate, we bought some Jogjakarta unique souvenir. And then, we went home at 13.00 p.m and arrived at 14.00 p.m.
On the way, we had traffic jam. After we arrived at home at 02.00 a.m. we went straight slept. We are very tired but happy.
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1. I and my family breakfast (it should be) I and my family had breakfast
2. After we are recreation (it should be) After we were recreation
3. We are very tired but happy (it should be) We were very tired but, happy.
The best one is My family and I
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My Trip To Bandung
Last school holiday my family and I went Bandung to saw my Grandmother. My Grandmother didn’t look well. She want us to came there because my grandmother very missed us.Actually my Grandmother live with my cousin and my aunt.We went to Bandung at 11 a.m. My journey to Bandung wasn’t really good because we always got traffic jam especially in Jakarta when school holiday came.When we were in Cipularang toll road, the views in around us became foggy so, the bus driver turned of bus’s headlight . I was arrived in Bandung at 5 p.m. Then we got taxi and went to my grandma house. The weather was bit cold here after rain. In the first day, We visited my father oldest sister.She was so rich.In the second day we visited hot spring in Ciater at night.The weather was cold so, I quickly went bathed in hot spring. Next day we just stayed at my Grandmother house. Last day, before we went back to Serang, we visited Dago to bought souvenirs.We also bought traditional snack from Bandung for my neighbors in Serang. We went back to home at 2 p.m. and arrived at 7 p.m. We were tired but we had great time.
We went back to home at 2 p.m.
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Name : Alya Wirahadi Purnama
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Holiday in Bogor
Last holiday I went to bogor to visited my grandmother with my family we went there on Saturday, 24 December 2011 at 05.00 p.m. and we arrived there at 09.00 p.m. on the way we rest twice, after we arrived, we went straight slept.
After I woke up I took a bath, then I with my family ate breakfast together. After we breakfast I went to “Taman Safari” we arrived at 09.00 a.m. , in there we saw many animals.
After we saw many animals I and My Family ate lunch together, we ate “Traditional” foods of West Java, after lunch we continued saw animals, after we took saw animals, we went to Grandmother’s house at 05.00 p.m. and we arrived at 07.00 p.m., after we arrived we went straight slept.
After I woke up I took a bath, then I with my family ate breakfast together, after we breakfast, I with my family went back to Serang.
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School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
JOURNEY TO MEDAN
Last holiday I went to Medan on December with my family. I depart from airport at six o’clock and I arrived in the Polonia’s airport at ten o’clock. After that I went to grandfather’s house in the Siantar. In the car I slept, then I arrived in the grandfather’s house at 1 o’clock and I slept in my father’s room.
In the morning I helped my uncle to the field. I saw many people in the field because the farmer harvest theirs field. I was very happy helped my uncle because I first time harvest rice-plant. After that I went to home for break and I ate at nine o’clock. Then I played with my brother and my sister in the yard.
In the afternoon I went to Paja Horas on the Medan. I bought blouse and cake and I went to home by public transportation. At night I ate with my uncle and aunt and then I took a bath. In the second day I went to grandfather’s mother and I arrived at 12 o’clock. Then I went to Toba Lake with my brother. In the Toba Lake I bought some souvenir for my teacher and my neighbors.
In the Monday I went to my uncle’s mother for permission returned to my house in the Serang. At four o’clock I went to Polonia’s airport and I arrived in Soekarno-Hatta airport at eight o’clock. I went to home during two hours and I arrived in the house at 12 o’clock. I was very happy during holiday.
I depart from airport
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Name : Alya Wirahadi Purnama
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It should be: I DEPARTED from airport
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Trip to Anyer Beach
Last holiday, I went to Anyer Beach on January 2011. I went to Anyer Beach with my family and my cousin family. We went to Anyer Beach from 09.00 am. The journey from my house to Anyer Beach is one hours.
After I and my family arrived at Anyer Beach, I saw amusement water in that place. Before I and my family played amusement water, I and my family break while. At 01.00pm, I and my family started to swam and played amusement water at Anyer Beach.
The amusement water at Anyer Beach such as: Banana Boat, Jet ski, Speed Boat, and etc. When I and my family bored to swam and played amusement water then I and my family bought some souvenir from Anyer Beach, some snack, some dresses and etc.
At 05.00 pm, I and my family go home with my own car. The journey to Anyer Beach made me tired, but I was so happy
...my house to Anyer Beach is one hours.
DeleteIt should be : ...my house to Anyer Beach "was" one hours.
..I and my family go home with my own car.
It should be : ..I and my family "was" home with my own car.
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Name:Faris Tegar Wicaksono
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School: SMPN 1 Kota Serang
MY EXPERIENCE TO THE JUNGLE
Last holiday, my family and I went to The Jungle in Bogor, West Java. We also invited Rezha and his family. We went to The Jungle by car. The time needed to go to Bogor is about three hours.
When we arrived to The Jungle, we went to locker room quickly, after that we went to changing room, then we swam happily.
First, my sister, Rezha and I tried the racer slide, it was so great. There is four slider with the length is about 8 meters each, and the height is about 4m, so we can slide away fastly. Second, we tried the lazy river, at there we can swam lazily. We also tried some small pools with small slider and fountain.
At twelve o’clock, we had lunch together at CFC, then weswam again. We also protected Keke (Rezha’s sister) when she was at small pool.
At evening, we back home.We arrived home at a half past ten, then I slept at ten o’clock. It was exhausting holiday.
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SPEND HOLIDAY IN BANDUNG
Last year ago, I and my family went to my grandparent’s house in Bekasi. We went there by bus. The traveled from my house to my grandparents house is two hours. When we arrived in there, we talk with my grandmother in garbage. My grandfather has slept. He was tired after he worked.After we talk in garbage. We ate in kitchen. When we ate, my grandfather had woke up. We talked in family room after we ate.We talked about where we went holiday.and the conclusion, we had spend holiday in Bandung. We went to Bandung by car. After we arrived in there, we stayed in hotel for 2 night. The first day in Bandung, we went to Kawah Putih, and Strawberry Park. We took picture together and we were laughed together! After that, we back to hotel. The next day, we went to Tangkuban Perahu and Super Mall. we were very happy, after that, we went back to Bekasi and the next day me and my family back home in Serang,Banten. I hope I will feel the holiday is more fun than this.
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Journey to Jakarta
Last holiday my family and I went to Jakarta on December. we depart from house at 07.00 am and we arrived on Jakarta at 09.00 am. After we arrived on Jakarta we went to “DuniaFantasi” or Dufan, we played many games like Tornado, Hysteria, Arum Jeram, and many more, we was very happy.
After we played many games, we went to uncle house on LebakBulus by a car. In the car, we saw many building and mini market, after that we arrived in Uncle house in LebakBulus. Then I slept In the afternoon in my Uncle room, and after I slept, I and my Uncle went to mini market to bought a feed by a car,after we bought few feed,we back to Uncle house.
After we arrived in Uncle house, I took a bath,afterthat,I and my family pray together,and then we ate feed from mini market, and at nigtht, we slept at 21.00 pm. In the morning, I and my family prepared to back to serang, after we prepared, we depart from Uncle house at 10.00 and we arrived at 12.15 pm. we was very happy and I can’t forgot this journey.
1. We depart from --> We departed from
Delete2. we went to uncle house on Lebakbulus --> we went to uncle house in Lebakbulus
3. I and my uncle went to mini market to bought a feed --> my uncle and I went to mini market to buy some food
4. after we bought few feed --> after we bought some food
5. we back to uncle house --> we were back to uncle house
6. I and my family pray together --> My family and I prayed together
7. we ate feed from mini market --> we ate food from mini market
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Holiday at SUKABUMI
Last week I and my family went to Sukabumi. We went to Sukabumi because my grandmother missed my mother. We left at 07.00 pm by car. We arrived at my grandmother’s house at 12.00 pm. We slept in grandmother’s bedroom. We stayed at my grandmother’s house for two days.
In first day, my sister, my aunt, my cousin and I went to the swimming pool in the “Cimelti”. We traveled for an hours. Arrive in the swimming pool we change our clothes and swam. After we felt to swam, we ate the warm noodle and drank tea. And then we took a bath. After that, we left the swimming pool. We walked around and laugh together. My mother saw the shop. The shop sold traditional food named “Mocci”. My mother bought “Mocci” in variety flavours. Arrive at my grandmother’s house, we rest for a minutes. I and my cousin played soccer games. We should go home to night but I watched news in the television that “Tol Serang Banten” is flooded. I and my family stayed one more day.
The second day, my family and I went to souvenir shops in the “Cibadak”. I bought traditional souvenir from Sukabumi. At Cibadak there are a lot of foods and drinks. My family bought some foods and drinks. After that my family and I bought souvenirs and foods, we prepared our luggage and then went home. We arrived home at 5 pm.
We felt so tire but we were so happy spent the holiday at my grandmother’s house.
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1.Arrive in the swimming pool we change our clothes and swam.
it should be (After we arrived in the swimming pool,we changed our clothes and swam)
2.After we felt to swam,we ate the warm noodle and drank tea
it should be (after we felt hungry,we ate the warm noodle and drank tea)
3.Arrive at grandmother's house,we rest for a minutes
it should be (after we arrived in grandmother's house,we took a rest for a minutes
4.We should go home to night
it should be (actually,we planed tonight went back to Serang)
5.At Cibadak there are a lot of foods and drinks
it should be (At Cibadak there were a lot of food and drink)
6.After that my family and I bought souvenirs and food,we prepared our luggage and then went home
it should be (After that my family and I bought souvenir and food,we prepared our luggage and then we went back to home
7.We felt so tire but we were so happy spent the holiday at grandmother's house
it should be (We felt so tired but we were so happy spend the holiday at my grandmother's house)
Name:Asri Catur RN
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School: SMP negeri 1 Kota Serang
Holiday in Surabaya
I and my family went to Surabaya by car. I look long to reach Surabaya 26 hours. I went to Surabaya together with my family. After that I and my family arrived in Surabaya, quickly to cleaned our self. Then we went to cousin house. After had fun in my cousin house, we back to grandma’s house we arrived there at 06.30 o’clock.
In the next day I and my family went to mountain in east java. There I saw beautiful view. On mountain there were many big and tall tree. After that I and my family went to my grandparents. I and my family arrived in grandparents house. And than my grandma cook meal for me and my family and ate it. After around a week in Surabaya I went back to Serang. Before that we prepared our luggage. I so happy in Surabaya. And I can not forget it……
Name : Resti Fortuna Maturasi
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1. i look long to reach Surabaya 26 hours
2. we went to cousin house
3. arrived in grandparents house
4. and than my grandma cook meal
5. i so happy in Surabaya
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1. i looked long to reach Surabaya 26 hours
2. we went to cousin's house
3. arrived in grandparents's house
4. and then my grandma cooked meal
5. i was so happy in Surabaya
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ReplyDeleteName : Resti Fortuna Maturasi
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On the last holiday, my family and I went to Jakarta to celebrate the new year. My family and I stayed in Sultan hotel for two days. Sultan hotel situated in Senayan. We enjoyed the scenery from the window’s hotel. We could see the Gelora Bung Karno. How beautiful it is. Right ?
First day, after we got a breakfast, we were back to our room and prepared to go to the circus show. The circus show was near from the hotel that we stayed., so, we went there by foot. The circus show started from 11 A.M until 1 P.M. It was amazing show.
We had lunch in “Kopi luwak” in Grand Indonesia. Grand Indonesia is a mall that situated in Bunderan HI. Not too far from the hotel. We went there by car. After lunch, we watch the film in Blitz Megaplex. We watched Alvin and The Chipmunk 3, then we went back to hotel because the day was night.
The last night in 2011, i waited 2012. During waiting 00:00, i chatted with my friend on facebook. We chatted until 1 AM., after I said Happy New Year to my friend, i slept until tomorrow. I was too sleepy.
We went to Dufan on the second day. We enjoyed the games there. After lunch in Bandar Jakarta, we went back to home. We were very glad, and we never ever forget this vacation.
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Last holiday, I went to Bandung city by car, we left home at 06:00. We arrived in hotel at 10:00. At hotel we found out a problem with air conditioner. So, we must move to other room.
After that we went to the peak. At there we could see stunning view. We took some pictures. After that we went to strawberry park, at there we could see strawberries. We can try to strum strawberries from the strawberry tree. Then My brothers and I played flying fox. After that we could see how to make strawberry cake. My mother and I tried to make a strawberry cake. Suddenly We felt hungry, so we ate in the restaurant near strawberry park. After that, we went back to hotel.
Next day, we checked out of the hotel. We left from hotel at 07:00, We continued our travel to ciampelas, at there we can find many gift shop. We bought some t-shirts,and some accessories. Then we went to Trans studio. at Trans Studio we can play games. My Brothers and I played sky pirate,and the others. After playing, we went back to home.
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Night in Surabaya
One month ago, my father and I visited Surabaya. We went there because we had a family’s event. Beside that, we had to visit my old brother. We went there by a plane from Soekarno Hatta International Airport in Jakarta. But, the plane was delayed for 30 minutes. It was make me very annoyed. After waited for 30 minutes, the plane comes and ready for the flight. The trip took for 1 hours and 10 minutes. It was a nice flight.
My father and I stayed in a comfort hotel that already booked. At the night, we walked around the town. Surabaya is not too different with Jakarta. It was a busy and crowded town. My father and I had a dinner in a roadside. The roadside food is not too bad. My father and I ate “Bebek Penyet”. The funny name for a food. Oh God, I almost forgot about my brother. He promise will come to our place. So, we waited him. Not long after it, he had come. I was shocked, my brother comes together with a monkey mask group. Haha it’s was a funny moment I never forget.
Finally, My father, my brother and I were sitting in the crowd of Surabaya while watching a monkey mask show
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Last holiday we went to sukabumi. we went by car, we were spend 5 hours to sukabumi. we also invited my uncle. At 6 pm we went to sukabumi,on the way I usually was sleep.we arrived in sukabumi at 11 pm.
In sukabumi we went to grandma house. At we arrived to grandma house,I was sleep and then I woke up at 6 am then I played with my brother. At 8 am we has breakfast, and then I was fishing with my brother we has laughing on the way, in a pool competed whom we get most who fish and then we were draw, at 11 pm we back went to grandma house. at 12.15 we has launch and then I played computer with my brother. I felt tired but it was interesting holiday…
I thinking it was my exciting holiday, but I has to end my holiday. we went back to serang at 5 pm .i wanted play again with my brother in sukabumi…
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Yesterday on Tuesday at 24 January 2012, I, my sister, and my mother went to swimming pool in “water park” without my father, because my father was busy. The swimming pool was near with my house. So it was just only 10 minutes.
After we arrived in swimming pool, my sister straightly jumped to pool, without changing clothes, and I rented the ball, because I was very afraid. But my mother did not follow because she was pregnant.
A few minutes, suddenly I and my sister was hungry. fortunately, my mother brought food and drink, so we were straightly ate with rice and fried chicken and the drinking were orange juice. It was very delicious.
After I and my sister felt full, we swam again, and we played slide. A few minutes, my sister felt cold, so we went to toilet to wash our body.
After that, we went to go home with motorcycle. We were very happy. I did not forget this event.
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Holiday in medan
Last year I and my family went to medan.it was amazing experience because it was my first time went to Medan.I went there by airplane.We stayed there just two days,it’s really short holiday but I enjoyed.
First day we went to brastagi.we need 2 hours to go there.it was bored trip because the way to go there really bad,but after we arrived there we can looked beautiful scenery,we can saw medan from there.after we went to the top of mountain sibayak we went to brastagi market in there my mom bought many oranges ,passion fruit,and etc.In night we have dinner in there we ate matabak Bangka,fried fish,and grilled chicken it’s feel really delicious because the weather really cold.
Second day we must wake up early because we must came back to medan,after arrived in hotel we packing because we must came back to Jakarta.
It was really best moment I ever had,I hope I can went to medan again.
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Last holiday, I and my family went to the Majalengka, West Java. We were stayed in Jaya Putra hotel for two days, we were very enjoyed to stayed there,beside the air was very fresh, we can swam most of the time,because there’s a swimming pool in front of our room.
First day, we were went to Maja, Maja situated on west Majalengka,on Maja we were traveled to some place like Birds Museum, Flowers Garden, and etc. most of the time we spent our time to looked around for birds chirped, absolutely just my father and my brother that enjoyed it. Cause I,my sister, and my mother not too interested at it.
Last day, we spent our time to some shop, yeah we can call it shop of souvenir, we went to shop for bought some souvenirs for our relatives, such like “encrod” “tut-tut” “simping” and etc. what we most like from some souvenirs was “tut-tut”, “tut-tut” was a fried snail that flavoured by chilli sauce, it was very hot, you should try it.
After bought some souvenirs we were went to hotel for prepared. It was 01.00 PM, after prepared, absolutely on 03.00 PM we’re went home,we think this holiday very exciting cause we can found something different from what we usually saw,this holiday was included as unforgettable holiday.
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-we were stayed in jaya putra hotel (it should be) we stayed in jaya putra hotel
-we're went home (it should be) we went home
-we were went to maja ( it should be) we went to maja
-we were traveled to some place (it should be) we traveled some place
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My holiday in Bogor
Last holiday, my family and I went to bogor to spent our holiday. We went to there at 09.00 am in the morning and arrived there at 12.00 pm in the afternoon.
In the first day in bogor,I spent my holiday with my grandmother of my father while my family spent they holiday with my grandmother of my mother. In there, I spent my holiday with 2 of cousins. Next day, my grandfather of my father persuaded us to fish in the fishing place. In there, there is a little funny story, when I fish in that time. My first cousin fell into the pond when he wanted to close to me. Lucky, the pool was not deep. In the third day, we(me, my cousins, and my grandfather) went to swimming pool. The water was cool, but it made us fresh. In there, we played water ball and ate burger. In the last day in bogor, my grandfather persuaded us to prayed at khadafi mosque’s. The mosque was huge and beautiful and had many rooms like library. After prayed, we went to my grandfather house’s. When we arrived at home, I was picked up by family and back home.
I think, this holiday was totally wonderful and I hope I can get more holiday and more fun.
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DeleteMy first cousin fell into the pond, it should be (My first cousin felt into the pond)
my grandmother of my father, it should be (my grandmother)
my grandfather of my father(my grandfather)
Name:Ingka Tisya Garnisa
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Spent My Holiday with Friends
Last holiday, I went to MOS (Mall Of Serang) with My friends; Alifa, Risya, Sofie, Fira, and Tiara for spent last holiday. Before day come, we had permission from our Parents.
The day come, I woke up earlier than before. and Before I went there, I helped My Mother, and I received a message from Tiara, she said “Ingka, would you go to MOS with me? If you agree, I wait you in Supermarket at 10a.m . Thanks” , I replayed her message ”okay” .
At 10a.m , I waited Tiara in front of supermarket, after that, Tiara and me went to MOS, exactly in Solaria by Jitney. And suddenly, Risya, Alifa, Sofie, and Fira had there before we came. We Ordered some Food and Drink for lunch. After we full, we went to Ramayana to play some games in Zoo2000 . We Hoped, We will get many tickets for present. We played all machine where got us many ticket, until we satisfied and exactly we got 560 tickets! Wow!! At 3 p.m , we go home, but Risya, Alifa, and Sofie must go to Primagama for bimble.
What a Fun Holiday with friend! I hope, I want to Spend my Holiday again with my friend like that!!
Name: Ratu Sofie Azkia Putri
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I think this recount is very good, but ..
- Before the day come(it should be) Before the day came.
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Bad Experience Visit the Post Office
Last month, I went to the post office with my mother. We went to there by public transportation. We went to the Padang’s restaurant before I went to the post office.
Cause the post office is near the Padang’s restaurant. So, we went to there by foot. On the way to the post office My Mother read ‘Nasi Goreng’ become ‘Nasi Gopeng’. I laughed, and my Mother follows me to laugh.
We did not look around. We also did not know there was someone who has behind us. When we realized he was chase us, and make me scared. Because, he wear tattered clothes and brought a radio on his shoulder
I began to run and leave my mother behind. My mother was shocked and follows me to run. After that, I jumped to get into the post office. Finally my Mother was rescued by some body. And I know the man that chased us is a crazy people.
Name : Thariq Ghiats Elnino Setya
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My holiday in Palembang
Last holiday, my family and I went to Palembang to spent our holiday. Before went to Palembang , we must go to Soekarno-Hatta International airport, time needed to Palembang with plane is one hour
First day , in the morning we were taken to kutobesak the fort, and then we waited for a boat to take us to the island kamaro, the time needed to pilaukamaro, about 1 hour, because the boat that took us very little, we passed the port of Palembang on the side of the river musi, thenwe pass Sriwijaya fertilizer factory, after passed through the factory, we reached the island kamaro, on the island kamaro after we sat down for a moment, after that we kamaro around the island, on the island there is a pagoda kamaro very high, after an hour there we returned to original place for the village pempek,crafts songket, and see the kingdom Sriwijaya . Second day we went home
I think, this holiday was totally wonderful and that’s made my new experience
-Before went to Palembang , we must go to Soekarno-Hatta International airport (Before we went to Palembang , we must go to Soekarno-Hatta International airport)
Delete-the time needed to Palembang with plane is one hour (we needed an hour away from Soekarno-Hatta International airport to palembang by plane.)
- we were taken to kutobesak the fort ( we went to kutobesak the fort)
- we waited for a boat to take us to the island kamaro (we waited a boat to take us to kamaro island)
- the time needed to pilaukamaro, about 1 hour (we needed an hour away to go to kamoro island by the boat)
- because the boat that took us very little (because the boat who takes us is very small)
- we passed the port of Palembang on the side of the river musi (we passed the port of Palembang on the side of the musi river)
- after passed through the factory, we reached the island kamaro (after that , we arrived at kamaro island)
- on the island kamaro after we sat down for a moment (at there, after we rested for some minutes)
- after that we kamaro around the island (after that we explored the island)
- on the island there is a pagoda kamaro very high (at there we could see a pagoda kamaro. Pagoda kamaro is very high)
- after an hour there we returned to original place for to the village pempek (after an hour , we went back to palembang)
- Second day we went home
I think, this holiday was totally wonderful and that’s made my new experience (The Second day, we went back to home. I think it was wonderful holiday and its my new experience)
Name: Dena Zahra Aulia
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School: SMPN 1 Kota Serang
Short Journey in Jogjakarta
Two years ago, I went to Jogja with my family. After we were ready, then we took the long journey. We went there by car. The Journey took 7 hour from Serang to Jogja. When we were arrived in Jogjakarta, we went to a hotel to took a rest.
On the next day in Jogja, we went to the temple of Borobudur. The journey took 30 minutes from the hotel to Borobudur temple. It was very boring. I often visit Borobudur. So, I think the temple of Borobudur are so so. After we had lunch, we went to my uncle’s house. What an exciting journey!!! We went to uncle’s house on 3 pm. After that, we back to our hotel.
On the next day, we went to Malioboro trade center. We went there to bought some souvenirs to our neighbors in serang. After we had lunch, We went to Serang.
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name : Raden. Moh. Bagja Kusuma
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Trip to Bandung
One month ago, My Family and I went to Bandung, West Java. The distance between Serang and Bandung is about 480 Km. And is needed about 4 hours if we took Cipularang Highway by car.
On first day My Family and I went to My Grand Mother house to rested and relax. Next day My Family and I went to Institute Technology Bandung to attended reunion of My Father. After that we went to a zoo to saw different kinds of animals. At there I gave some food for an elephant, it was very exiting. After that I was very hungry and we went to a restaurant to ate some food. After that we went to My Grand Mother house to rested and relax. On third day My Family and I went to Bandung Super Mall to shop and played.
On last day My family and I decided to go home and we arrifed safely. It is My holiday, what it yours?
Name : Satria Fandyardi Rizky
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School : SMPN 1 Kota Serang
My Vacation in Padang and Bukittinggi
7 months ago, my family and I went to Padang. We went there without my father, he was busy with his worked. We went to Padang by bus. It took 2 days. It is very tired.
I was happy when we arrived at Padang. First, I just spent my time in Padang with ate some delicious food that made by my aunt and played with my cousins. After several days in Pandang, we went to Bukitinggi for 3 days. First day in Bukittinggi, we went to ‘Ngarai Sianok’. We saw the magnificent view of the valley. Next day we went to ‘Jam Gadang’, the big clock in Bukittinggi. We did not forgot to took pictures there. Last day in Bukkitinggi we went to market for breakfast and bought some souvenirs. After that, we back to Padang again.
1 day before we went home, my father and my uncle arrived at Padang. And we went home with my father by plane.
I can not forget this vacacion, I hope we can do it again.
Name : Raina Rahmayanti
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I can not forget this vacacion, (it should be) I can not forgot this vacation.
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My holiday to ciwedey
Last year my family and I went to bandung west java, on first day me and family rested in my uncle house the distance between serang and bandung is 480 KM and its needed 4 hours,if we took by car second day my family and I went to ciwidey .in ciwidey I visited kawah putih ,in there I saw beautiful scenary its was very amazing for me after that I saw vulcanic lake after that I rested in vila ,in vila there is garden tea etc
Third day I played in the garden and saw beautiful scenary , at there I played flying fox, atv, and swam in the pool after that I ate in restaurant its very delicious , and then I went to the mall ,at there I was shopping and browsing around ,after that I back to home. It is my holiday what is your’s?
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MY HOLIDAY IN MALANG
Last year, my family and I went to Malang, East Java to visit my mother’s family. I really happy when my father told me that we want to went to Malang. It could be a great moment ever! We had start this long journey at 3 am. Four hours later, we had arrived at Bandung. Of course, its still far from Malang. Many kilometers should we passed. Did you know? All parts of my body feels so tired. Its feel like any stone on my body. I really want to layed on a bed. So tired.
I tried to open my eyes. But it’s so hard. And when I open my eyes, i think this place is so wonderful. Many trees are found there. Wow! I am just arrived at Malang! This is my mother’s family house. Its little bit scary, because the build is old. But, its so cold, maybe I can’t feel hot anymore.
Almost 5 days there. I think, it’s so fun! That’s all about my holiday!
Name : Satria Fandyardi Rizky
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School : SMPN 1 Kota Serang
Coments:
-we had arrived at Bandung, (it should be) we arrived at Bandung
-And when I open my eyes, (it should be) And when I opened my eyes
Name : Annisa Febrianingsih
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Holiday To BANDUNG
Last week , me and my family went to Bandung , Paris van java we left home at 06.30 am .
Frist day , We stay in my grandmother’s for 2 day , me and my family on the way Ciwiday,west java with my grandmother to see a views and strawberry’s peak .
In the journey we see a views so beautiful and fresh air , when a arrive in ciwiday, west java me and my sister picking strawberries and played outbond and ATV . But my mother , father , and grandmother visited a mall for a buy souvenir .
Last day , me and my family on the way again to Ciamis,west java in there we swim or hot water spring and buy souvernir. And we went to house grandmother , in there my family rested for 2 day .
Next day, we went back to home at 00.00 a.m and we arrived at 06.00 p.m and this my holiday with my family in Bandung, Paris Van Java unforgettable my holiday in Bandung.
name : rd. m. bagja kusuma
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comments : 1. me and my family, it should be ( my family and i)
2. we stay in my grandmother's for 2 day, it should be ( we stayed in my grandmother's house for 2 days )
3. to see a views and strawberry's peak, it should be ( to saw a views and strawberry's peak)
4. we see a views so beautiful and fresh air, when a arrive in ciwidey, it should be ( we saw a views so beautiful and fresh air, when arrived in ciwidey )
5. me and my sister picking strawberries, it should be ( my sister and i picked strawberries)
6. visited a mall for buy souvenir, it should be ( visited a mall for bought souvenir )
7. in there we swim or hot water spring and buy souvenir, it should be ( at there we swam on hot water spring and bought souvenir )
8. And we went to house grandmother , in there my family rested for 2 day, it should be ( and we went to my grandmother's house, at there my family and i rested for 2 days )
name : Ratu Biru Nabila
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school: SMPN 1 Kota Serang
Holiday At Cimahi
Last month,me and my family went to cimahi west java,there I am going on vacation for 3 day and stay at my uncle’s house.
First day,I’am going to kamanja at ciamis west java,kamanja is place very happy,in there me and my brother played flying fox,ATV,trampolin and many more.After that me and my family went to tangkuban perahu at lembang and in there me with my family ate rabbit satay and roasted corn.
Second day,me and my family goes to trans studio bandung,at bandung supermall,west java,in there I and my family played giant swing,dunia lain,jelajah,francisco biasia and many more.
Third day,I and my family goes to randma’s house in there many families who stay at grad mother home.me and my family stay at my grand mother house for one day,after that me and my famiy went to home,on tne way my mother buy souvenir to distribute for my mother’s friends.
Name:Atika izna ulfia
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School : 1 Junior high school serang city
- me and my family went to cimahi (it should be)i and my family went to cimahi
- I am going on vacation for 3 day and stay at my uncle’s house (it should be)i was went on vocation for 3 day and stayed at my uncle's
I’am going to kamanja at ciamis west java(it should be)i was went to kamanja at ciamis
Name : Fragrans Anjasmara Sobar
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School : SMPN 1 Kota Serang
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My Holiday to Carita Beach
Last holiday, my family and I, went to the Carita Beach. At 7 AM we were go to Carita Beach. I arrived in Carita Beach at 9 AM… Then we went to my grandmother house… My family and I lunch, finished lunch we waiting afternoon…. We went Carita Beach when the afternoon come…. After arriving in Carita Beach, we drank coconut… It was very refreshed, then my sister and I swam in the Carita Beach then my sister invited me to make sand castle… It was very fun, and my mother took me to play banana boat, Then banana boat officer give us a life jacket, We climbed into the banana boat, and then the officer dropped our guard. Then officer took us to the ground. then my mother ask for stay at the hotel carita. Then in morning we go home at 8 AM.
Name: Dwi Apriyono
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School: SMP Negeri 1 Serang
Hello my name is Dwi and this is my adventure
Its about 2 years ago I went to ancol. I went to ancol with my friend. We went to ancol to study tour. I sat with my best friend his name is Billy. Billy and I were best friend since we were grade 2 in elementary school.
In the bus we sang Bondan song. My friend Shandy bring ukulele. After arrived we went to the locked to bought the ticket. After that I and Billy went to star war. After that we have lunch. After that we prayed Zuhur In the mosque. After that I went to Sea World. I saw many fish, octopus. After that I pray Ashar. After that I went back to home
There is my holiday, how about us?
-we went to the locked
Deleteit should be: we went to locket
-we have lunch
it should be: we had lunch
-I pray Ashar
it should be: i prayed Ashar
-how about us
it should be: how about you?
Name : Marco Reynaldi
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Comments:
My friend Shandy bring ukulele
it should: My Friend, Shandy brought ukulele.
Name: Kintan Septa Sari .N
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School: SMP negeri 1 kota serang
HOLIDAY IN SURABAYA
this experiences, it’s about 2 years ago. When I and my family went to Surabaya. We went to Surabaya by a car. My dad was drove it. We get there 26 hours before that, we took a break in rest area. In rest area we drunk, ate, relax our body and fill the gasoline. 25 minute later, I and my family continued the trips.
But we get some problem… jammed!!!. That is so, bored in the car. I just can listened music, and talked to my family. That jammed caused by accident. And in the last, The jammed finished about 1 hour.
finally I and my family arrived to Surabaya, in my grandparents home. In my grandparents home, we ate cooked from my grandmother. The cooked is not bad. But Because that was 10.00 o’clock, My big family going to slept…
Next day my big family was went to beach. But I forget, what that beach’s name. the view in the beach, is so beautiful. In there I playing sand, swam, and bought some souvenir. After we have fun in the beach, we went back to my grandparents house. because it was night time so, when we come to home we went to bad and slept.
After 3 days later we prepared our luggage and then went to Serang. We arrived home at 08.00 pm. I felt so tired but it’s was happy in Surabaya.
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Comments :
1. I and my family
2. we ate cooked from my grandmother
that can be replaced with :
1. my family and I
2. we ate food that cooked by my grandmother
1. my dad was drove it
2. we get there 26 hours
3. relax our body
4. fill gasoline
5. we get some problem
6. that is so bored in the car
7. my big family going to slept
8. my big family was went to beach
9. but I forget what that beach's name
10. in there I playing sand
11. after we have fun in the beach
12. when we come to home
13. I felt so tired but it's was happy
that should be:
1. my dad was drive it / my dad drove it
2. we got there 26 hours
3. relaxed our body
4. filled the gasoline
5. we got some problem
6. that was so bored in the car
7. my big family going to slept
8. my big family went to beach
9. but I forgot what that beach's name
10. in there i played sand
11. after we had fun in the beach
12. after we came home
13. I felt so tired but it was happy
name: atika izna ulfia
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school: 1 Junior high school serang city
WEEKEND AT SIDOARJO
last weekend, I my family went to sidoarjo. Sidoarjo it’s my first day went to the sidoarjo. Sidoarjo we nice tewn love to staged thore.
First day on the morning, I and my family looking for hotels in Sidoarjo to rest for at sidoarjo. During the day I and the family went to a relative's house in Sidoarjo to Hospitality some large family. During the last Hospitality invite me and brother in a vacation to Surabaya by relatives and kaka so I know the experience of a holiday in Surabaya and to know how the situation in Surabaya. Me and sister I've got a lot of experience last year's holiday in Surabaya zoo, museums in Surabaya, Surabaya heroes garden, swimming pool and an exciting place. Already the evening I, brother, and my sister came home to sidoarjo during the trip I had an exciting experience for that year. Arriving at your home very tired and immediately invited to return to the hotel sidoarjo.
Second day, on the morning I and my family spent our time to jogging for a while then we contiwe our course to some plane in sidoarjo. Like museum sidoarjo and the park sidoarjo. I and my family go to hotel for break time.
Third day, I and my family get ready to go back to serang city.
name : ratu biru nabila
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comment:
1. I my family went to sidoarjo., (it should be)I and my family went to sidoarjo.
2. Sidoarjo we nice tewn love to staged thore, (it should be)sidoarjo was a nice town, we loved to stay there.
3. During the last Hospitality invite me and brother in a vacation to Surabaya by relatives and kaka so I know the experience of a holiday in Surabaya and to know how the situation in Surabaya, (it shoud be) During the last Hospitality invited me and brother in a vacation to Surabaya by relatives and old sister so I know the experience of a holiday in Surabaya and to know how the situation in Surabaya.
4. then we contiwe our course to some plane in sidoarjo, (it should be)then we continued our course to some plane in sidoarjo.
5. I and my family go to hotel for break time, (it should be) I and my family went to hotel for break time.
6. I and my family get ready to go back to serang city (it should be) I and my family get ready come back to serang city.
name: ashief al-hadad
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school: 1 Junior high school serang city
My trip to anyer
holiday yesterday, my family and I went to Anyer, I think it's an enjoyable holiday. before leaving for anyer, my first didatangangi by my cousin and lunch.
we went to anyer not through streets, because it would be more lama.jadi we decided to pass through the mountain. on the way to anyer, we saw many beautiful sights.
after arriving at Anyer, we check in and receive a luxury cottage near the beach. We also directly play sand. we did not swim at the beach because the water is so salty, we swam in the pool. after the water settle for playing in the restaurant we were relaxing on the beach and enjoy the sunset.
at night we saw a lion dance while enjoying our dinner. lion dance was also very interesting. and also there are some people who sing the song dangdut.itu is a very pleasant evening.
satisfied after having fun, we had to go home at a later date. because my dad had to go bekerja.itu what your story is my story?
Name: Reva Anggitasari
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Comment:
-I think it's an enjoyable holiday. It should be, I think it was an enjoyable holiday.
-Before leaving for anyer, my first didatangangi by my cousin and lunch. It should be, before leaved from anyer, my cousin visited and we went to lunch
-We went to anyer not through streets, because it would be more lama. It should be, we went to anyer not cross the highway because it would be much longer.
-Jadi we decided to pass through the mountain. It should be, so we decided to pass through the mountain.
-After arriving at Anyer, we check in and receive a luxury cottage near the beach. It shoul be, after arrived at Anyer, we checked in and received a luxury cottage near the beach.
-After the water settle for playing in the restaurant we were relaxing on the beach and enjoy the sunset. It should be, after the water settle for played in the restaurant we were relaxed on the beach and enjoy the sunset.
-Lion dance was also very interesting. It should be, lion dance was also very interested.
-Also there are some people who sing the song dangdut. It should be, also there are some people who sing the song dangdut.
-Itu is a very pleasant evening. It should be, it was a very pleasant evening.
-Because my dad had to go bekerja.itu what your story is my story?. It shoul be, because my dad had to go worked. It was my story what your story?
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ReplyDeleteName :Ines Rinera
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My Holiday in Gorontalo
I spent my school holidays in June last time with my friends. We went to Gorontalo in addition to a vacation but also for national Jumbara PMR VII. We went to there in the early morning, before that, we spent the night in a dormitory.
We were there to do activities related to health, friendship, solidarity and others which make such activities did not match there. I was there to follow the activities Information and communication, me and three my friends looked for news to be Jumbara post bulletins and made a bulletin board. Lokakaraya, me and four my friends shared stories about Red Cross activities in each country with participants from overseas. I also followed health education and blood donors, sports and outbound, and theater humanity.
Every day all the members of each contingent did gymnastics and continued with their respective duties. On the first and last days there did not do gymnastics, gymnastics replaced by the first day of the opening ceremony and closing ceremony on the last day.
We went back to our provinces after one week of being there. I will miss my friends there.
Name:Aryadea Agnandika
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school:SMPN 1 Kota Serang
My Holiday in Yogyakarta
Last holiday,my family and I went to Yogyakarta, Yogyakarta special region, We departed from house at 06:00 A.M,we went to Yogyakarta by car,its took about one dayWhen we arrived to Yogyakarta,we were very happy,then we went to a restaurant to had dinner,after that,we direct to a hotel to take a rest.
First day , we visited keraton Yogyakarta,this is one of many historical places in Yogyakarta,in this we can knew some historical objects at yogyakarta,after we visit keraton yogaykarta,we visited taman pintar,in taman pintar there are many places such as gedung oval, gedung heritage,at 10:00 A.M,my family and i went to hotel for slept and relaxed,
next day , we went to my aunt's house for stay in touchthere we talked and told each other state of the citythen my uncle took us to shop at my aunt's house malioborojarak from about 2 to malioboro in there we buy handbags, clothes, and souvenirs. And at 04:00 PM we went back to Serang.
1. After we visit keraton yogyakarta,(It should be) after we visited keraton yogyakarta.
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Taman safari zoo
One years ago, my family and I went to taman safari zoo. My family and I prepared a things personality. At 08.00 a.m. my family and I visited taman safari zoo by car.
On the way my family and I stopped on “INDOMARET”. My father bought snack and drinks. After that we continued a journey. At 10.00 a.m. my family and I arrived on taman safari zoo. My father bought 7 tickets.
And then we travelled around taman safari zoo. First minute My sister,brother,and I saw a monkey hang, and we saw a elephant walked around. Second minute we saw a lion slept by position facedown.
When passed orangutan area, my family and I gave carrots to orangutan. We saw orangutan smoked, and we laughed. after arounded, my family and I watched owl show. My mother,sister, and I bought souvenir on mini market zoo.
After that, my family and I back to serang at 07.00 p.m. I felt very very very happy. However I got tired, my family and I slept.
Name : Tiara Sekar Arum
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School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
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Holiday in Bandung
On the last December of 2010, my family and I went to Bandung. We went there by a car that drove by my father. A night before we went to Bandung, my mom was packing our clothes, snacks, drinks, foods and etc. So, when we want to went to Bandung, there’s no stuffs that forgotten. We left home about 3 a.m. I was happy during the trip, because the view were amazing! When we passed Jakarta (it’s about 5 a.m.), I saw many skyscraper. And the skyscraper were very tall with the bright lights from the lamps that yet to turn off. It’s one of the beautiful view I ever saw. Overall, I was enjoy the trip.
Oh yeah, we stayed on Bandung in my aunt house for 3 days. Finally, we arrived in my aunt house at 9 p.m. And took a rest on that day. The first day in Bandung, my family and I just stayed at home and watched TV.
The second day, my mom said to my aunt that she want to went to “Pasar Baru” for bought some fabric. My mom said, my cousin, my sister and me can followed her to “Pasar Baru”. We went to “Pasar Baru” by a train. The bad news, I forget what the name of the station now. But that was a good experience for me, because it was the first time I went to a place by a train. After we arrived in “Pasar Baru” my mom bought a fabric in the Fabric shop. The fact, “Pasar Baru” is more clean and tidy than “Rau Trade Center”. Before we back home, my aunt asked my mom to tasted the Rujak near “Pasar Baru”. My mom said yes. The tasted of the Rujak were spicy but delicious. After we ate Rujak, we went back to my aunt home.
The last day, we went to Puncak, Bogor, Jawa Barat. The view at Puncak is so beautiful. My family and I went to Strawberry Park and Tea Park in Puncak. The temperature was cool. So, I wore sweater. My sister and my cousin were ware sweater too. We took some picture there. I love all the picture. And we back to my aunt home was about 7 a.m.
The next day we back home in Serang. I never forget the memories in Bandung on that holiday. Because it was the very nice holiday
Name : Indria Yustisi Noviani
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School : Smpn 1 kota Serang
My Trip To Bandung
One day my family and I went to Bandung, we leaved serang at 10:00 AM and arrived in Bandung at 15:00 PM. We stayed at Lodaya Hotel for 2 night. First night in Bandung we searched delicious food and we choosed 'Batagor Kuah' the taste of 'Batagor Kuah' very delicious very different with serang. After ate we rounded place near our Hotel, we saw many person who did night activities like ; hang out with their friends,went to mall with their family and etc. Satisfied to rounded we felt tired so,we went back to Hotel. Arrived at Hotel we directed to sleep.
Next day, we went to my aunt's house it is about 25 minutes if we not got traffic jam. Finally, we arrived in my uncle's house we talked about 1 hour after that we went back to hotel. In my way to hotel we stopped to lunch, after our stomach fulled we went back to hotel to slept. In the night we went to BSM (Bandung Super Mall) we directed to Gramedia,there I bought novel. Finished, choosed and bought a book we were dinner and then we back to Hotel. Next day, we were check out from hotel and we went to Bandung Zoo.
In Bandung zoo we saw bear, Various Kind of crocodile,lion,tiger and etc. After we saw many animals we went out from Bandung Zoo, in front of Bandung zoo there were riding horse we ride riding horse for 15 minutes after that, we bought 'pisang ijo' close to the my car park and then we went back to Serang.
It was my pleasant experience and unforgettable moment :).
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Nama: Rania ARi Puspita
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-Arrived at Hotel we directed to sleep.
It should be: Arrived at Hotel we directed to slept.
Name: Ridho Rivaldo
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School: SMPN 1 SERANG
Journey to Jakarta
Last holiday I went to Jakarta for met my brother in the Rawamangun. I arrived in my brother’s house at 10 am and after that we played football in the yard. In the afternoon we went back to home for took a rest. In the home, I took a bath after that I had dinner with my brother. At 7 pm we played computer until 9 pm and at 9.30 pm I slept on the upper floor.
In the morning I played football with my brother. After that we had a breakfast and we went to the ANCOL for entertainment. I arrived in the ANCOL at 12 pm and I played banana boat, it was scary. I had a lunch in the restaurant after had a lunch we played TONARDO. We went to home and we bought some food for ate in the home. I arrived in home at 9 pm and I slept. Next day we prepared thing for went to home in the SERANG. I arrived in the home at 10 am. It holiday was happy.
Name : Rifki Andriansyah Akram
ReplyDeleteClass : VIII B
1 junior high school Serang
Got accident
On Saturday, I went to a small party at my friend’s house, the party finished at 01.00 a.m. and I got home at 01.30 a.m. After I got home, I watched TV and fell asleep on the sofa. Suddenly, I fell of the sofa and woke up. It was 09.00 in the morning ! I ran to the kitchen and had a cup of tea. At 09.15 p.m, I took my bicycle out of the garage, oh no ! it was broken. I left my bicycle and ran to school. I got to school at 09.50 p.m but the school was very quiet. I was really worried. Because nobody was at school, I decided to go back home. My parents were still in bed when I got home.
Then I looked at the calendar and I smiled, I remembered that it was Sunday !
Name: Anisa Dhea Nurvita
DeleteClass: VIII
School: SMPN 1 SERANG CITY
-fell asleep on the sofa.
It should be: fell a slept on the sofa.
Name : Dwi Apriyono
ReplyDeleteClass : VIII B
1 junior high school Serang
Journey
Last year, I and my family wanted to visited my cousin’s house, In Bandung city. Before I and my family went to Bandung city, we prepared the clothes and stuff. We went there by our own car. My mother cooked for in the car, I and my brother bought snack at supermarket. I and my family was ready to go to my cousin’s house, In Bandung, at 10.00 am. On the journey, I saw the scenery, I saw rice fields, plantations, buildings, mall, housings complex and many flower gardens during the journey.
After view hours, I and my family were at rest area for eat and prayed dzuhur. We weren’t at rest area, but we continued the journey. On the journey we trapped traffic jam. After a long waiting, finally the traffic jam have smooth again. After view hours, we were at rest area for pray ashar. After pray ashar we continued the journey.
Finally, we were in Bandung at 15.00 p.m we went to supermarket to buy the give for my cousin. We went to my cousin’s house and we arrived there at 16.00 p.m when I got there, I fell asleep. When I woke up, I saw my family gather. I was at TV roomto join gather with my family in TV room. We chatted and joked in TV room last time. I was very happy. Time show at 20.00 p.m, its time to dinner. After dinner, I pray Isha and then slept. It is delicious food last dinner.
The next day, we went to pond, my dad and my brother were fishing, but I and my mother cooking for lunch. After my family lunch, we were to go back to my cousin’s house.
After 7 days holiday to my cousin’s house, I had to back to go my house in Serang city because I had to back to school.
In journey back to home, we bought souvenirs at accesories shop. After we bought souvenirs, we continued the journey back to home afternoon. It was so exciting last travelling and it was happy holiday
Name:Yuda Disastra
ReplyDeleteClass:VIII B
School:1 Junior Hgh School Serang City
Went to grandmother’s house
3 months ago, my family and I went to grandmother's house in Cilegon .before that we prepared the goods that needed, after that we departed from home at 09.00 with a car. on the trip, we saw a lot of people are on the roadside, after saw the people’s, I slept in the car because was tired, not long after that we arrived in grandmother's house at 11:15 am, at grandmother's house, we ate fried chicken, it was very tasty.
after that, I and my cousin helped uncle to gave feed the eagle on backyard .this was the first time I gave feed the eagle,I was very happy .after that,we played football in the yard. and after playing football, we played playstation.
after played playstation, my family and I am prepared back to serang .before that,we sayed goodbye to grandmother .and after that, we left from grandmother’s house at 16.00 .and we arrived at home at 17:45. We was very tired and happy.
my family and I am prepared.....
DeleteIt shold be: my family and I were prepared.....
Name: Rania Ari Puspita
ReplyDeleteClass: VIII
SMPN 1 Serang City
Idul Fitri in Sukabumi
Last Idul Fitri holiday on Agust, I and my family with my aunt, my uncle. my cousin went to grandmother's house in Sukabumi by car.
We left at 07.00 pm. We went in the evening because we avoided the traffic jam. We arrived there at 11.00 pm. Then we slept in the badroom that has been prepared. We stayed there for 3 days.
First day, I with my sister, brother and cousin went to Sukabumi. We bought chicken and cooking spices for cooking "Opor". And we bought cookies for guest on Idul Fitri day. After that we help my mother,and my grandmother cooking in the kitchen for Idul Fitri day.
Finally Idul Fitri day come. We ware very happy. Early in the morning we went to Mosque to pray. The we visited our relative and neighbor to apologize one another. We wanted to clean our sin that have been done, during a year on this holy day. After that, we went home and gethered in the living room. The most important thing in Idul Fitri day, of course we apologize one another. Firstly, we shaked the oldest that is my grandmother. Unfortunately my grandfather has passed away. Than I shaked my parents, my aunt, my uncle, my brother, my sister and my cousin. And we talked funny stories and laughed happing. When we looked at the table in the dining room "Opor Ayam" and "Ketupat" have waited us we went to dining room and ater togather. After ate I with my sister, and my cousin playing games PS in the living room. I vs my cousin play soccer games in the PS and I lost in the games.In the evening I and my big family went to "Cibadak" for bought tradisional food and ate meatballs. Than, we bought "Mocci" and ate meatballs. After we bought and ate, we went home and we slept.
Last day,early in the morning I woke up and I prepared for back to home in Serang. Finished preapared we left for Sukabumi at 06.00 pm, and we arrived at 11.00 pm. We tired but we very happy:). I hope I can visit my grandmother in next year's at Idul Fitri day again :).
Thanks you:)
Name: Nurina Almira
Deleteclass : 8B
SMPN 1 SERANG
~we shaked the oldest that is my grandmother.
it should be we shook hands...
because past tense from shake not shaked but shook.
~And we talked funny stories and laughed happing.
it should be ...and laughed happy. because happy can't added by ing.
~When we looked at the table in the dining room "Opor Ayam" and "Ketupat" have waited us we went to dining room and ater togather.
it should be ... and ate together.
thank you~ :D
name : Alifa Rizky Nur'aeni
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
OUR TRIP TO MOUNT BROMO
3 years ago, my family and I went to mount Bromo. We went there by car. We left home in the evening and arrived there in the afternoon (after took for 2 days).
When we arrived, we dropped out our bag, and tidied up them in the villa. After took a bath, we walked around the villa. The view from the villa is very beautiful. There are the desert with “gunung Batok” as the background. I felt so comfort there!At 3.00 am in the next day, we went to the mount Bromo by Jeep. We rented the Jeep. Before we looked for mount Bromo, we went to a place where we can see the beautiful sunrise. It’s beautiful! After that, we continued our journey to mount Bromo by Jeep, Passed through the desert. The desert is very spacious. Then, we rode a horse to mount Bromo. We saw the crater. It is very large crater I had see. After that, we went vack to villa. In the nexy day, we watched football match together. I felt so happy.
In the last day, we continued our journey to Ambarawa. I was sad to leave mount Bromo. I hope I can go there next.
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ReplyDeleteName: Nurina Almira
ReplyDeleteClass: 8B
SMPN 1 SERANG
HOLIDAY IN THE ZOO
Last year, my family and i went to a zoo in bogor, we went the by car at 06.00 in the morning. It took about 3 hours to get there.
Finally, we arrived there. First, we saw many big animals like lion, hippo, dear, giraffe by car. Many car gave the animals carrots. But, it is said that do not open the car window and do not give the animal food. After that, we can saw other animal. But we can only went there by foot. But,we really hungry. So we ate at a restaurant and watched the elphant show, and then we went to look the animals . like snakes, some species of bird and many more. After that we went to find some souveniers.
In the evening, we went back to serang. That was really axciting holiday. I’d like to see animals. I hope i can go there again.
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DeleteName: Kintan Septa Sari
Deleteclass : 8B
SMPN 1 SERANG
- we went the by car at 06.00 in the morning
we went by the car at 06.00 in the morning
-and then we went to look the animals
and then we went to looked the animals
-I’d like to see animals
I’d like to saw animals
Name : Tiara Sekar Arum
ReplyDeleteClass : 8b
Holiday in Taman Mini
In the 2011 my family and I went to Taman Mini Indonesia Indah. Or we often called it as TMII in Jakarta. We went there by a car that drove by my father. My mother and I was prepare the food supply a night before we went to TMII. In the morning, we left Serang about 5p.m. We got the traffic jam during the trip. Finally, we arrived in TMII about 9a.m.
In TMII my father bought 4 ticket for us. After that, we entered TMII. First we visited traditional culture zone. There, we saw many traditional home from all Indonesian culture. I was interested with Honai, a traditional home from Papua. After we visited traditional culture zone we walked around to Perahu Gantung game. The game can made my heart felt so scared. Third, we visited children area. We waited my sister that played here. And the last, we watched marching band festival. The marching band was so amazing. Many instrument music that played in this marching band.
Finally, we back home about 5a.m. I would never forgot this interesting holiday.
Name : PUTRI SEPTIANINGSIH
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII – B
School : 1 JHS serang city
Went to DUNIA FANTASI ( DUFAN )
Last year my family and I went to DUNIA FANTASI ( DUFAN ) in Jakarta, we went there at 06.00 a.m. by a car. In our journey, I just played my hand phone and talked together with my family. We arrived at 08.00 a.m. and then my father bought five tickets for us. Next, we entered DUFAN .
First, we tried KOMEDI PUTAR
Second, we were choose BIANGLALA. We can saw all of the view from the top of BIANGLALA’s rotation.
Third, we visited ISTANA BONEKA, there we can saw many doll
Fourth, we were choose HALILINTAR, in this game I was so afraid, because it was the first time I took this game.
Fifth, we were choose ARUNG JERAM, that was made our clothes wet.
And the last we visited RUMAH KACA and RUMAH MIRING, it was so amazing moment, I felt very surprised.
Before we went home, we bought some souvenir, especially clothes and hats. And we went back home at 16.30 p.m. and arrived home at 19.00 p.m.
It was my unforgettable holiday
NAME: NURLINDA PUSPA UTAMI PUTRI
DeleteCLASS: VIII-B
SCHOOL: JHS 1 SERANG CITY
COMMENT
1. We can saw all of the view
(It should be) we could see all of the view
Nama : Anisa Dhea Nurvita
ReplyDeleteClass : 8 B
1 JHS Serang City
WENT TO THE ZOO
Last year at December 30th 2012, my mother, my sister, my father and I, went to the Ragunan zoo in Jakarta.
We went to the zoo by car. We went from Serang at 10.30 a.m. and arrived at 12.30 a.m. after arrived at Jakarta, we visited my uncle and my aunt first. In their house we given warm drink and snack. Than, we straightly went to the zoo at 02.15 p.m.
In the gate of the zoo, my mother bought ticket to enter the zoo. In the zoo, I saw many kinds of animal, such as, monkey, deer, bird, crocodile, etc. in the zoo we also took the picture with the animal. After we walked around the zoo, we were very tired and hungry. Fortunately, my mother brought the rice, fried chicken, and orange juice.
After that we back home. We felt very happy. We leaved Jakarta at 05.30 p.m. and arrived at my home was 08.00p.m.
This moment was unforgettable memories because my journey was very interesting.
- after arrived at Jakarta ( it should be) : after arrived in Jakarta
Delete- In their house we given warm drink and snack (it should be) : In their house we gaven warm drink and snack
- my mother bought ticket to enter the zoo (it should be) : my mother bought tickets to enter the zoo
-This moment was unforgettable memories (it should be) : This moment was unforgettable memories
Name : Septyana Dwi Ernaida
ReplyDeleteClass : VIII B
School : 1 Junior Hifh School Serang city
My Holiday in Karawaci Mall
Last holiday my family and I went to Karawaci Mall. We went there at 10.00 a.m. It was my good holiday because I went with my aunt and my cousin. I was very happy. We went there by a car. Because my mom was pregnant, we must be carefull.
We arrived there at 11.30 a.m. As we arrived there, we went to “Gramedia”. We bought many book at there. My sister, cousin and I bought some comic and novel. We bought some notes too. My aunt bought an Alkitab. My mom bought many recipe books. My father just road book at there. After that we went to TIMEZONE. At there we played many games. We played rollercoaster, “bianglala”, “alibaba”, etc. After that we bought some clothes. We had shopping at there.
After we had shopping, we went to food store. My mom, my cousin and my aunt ate in “Gang Kelinci” store. My father, my sister and I ate in “Hoka-Hoka Bento” store. After we satisfied, we met in parking area. We were ready for back home. At 03.00 p.m, we back home brought some memories of this holiday
* My father just road book at there ( it should be) : My father just read book at there ( read = verb 2)
Delete* At there we played many games (it should be) :There we played many games
NAME: INDRIA YUSTISI NOVIANI
DeleteCLASS: VIII-B
HOLIDAY IN THE SWIMMING POOL
ReplyDeleteLast week ,my family and I , went to “ WATER BOOM “ in Cikarang , JAKARTA . we went there by car at 08.00 A.M in the morning , it took about 2 hours . in the road my family and I , ate and drunk the snack and drink , and then we also enjoyed the song in my car .
We arrived at 10.00 A.M , first , we changed the clothes , next we played there , example : played the slide and many more . after we played , my family and I took a bath , then , we ate together
In the evening , we went back to Serang , I hope , I can go there again because my holiday was unforgettable .
Name: Asri Catur R.N
Deleteclass: 8
School: SMPN 1 SERANG CITY
-in the road my family and I
on the road my family and I
-ate and drunk the snack and drink
ate the snack and drunk
Name : Ardelia Yolanda S.
ReplyDeleteClass : VIII B
School : 1 Junior High School Serang city
Tanjung Lesung
One years ago, my family and iwent to Tanjung Lesung at 10.00AM by car. Before that my mother and i prepared the clothes. In car, my brother, my sister and i sang together.
On the way my brother and i bought some foods and drinks. and we continued our destination. At 05.00PM we arrived at villa in Tanjung Lesung. And we rested in there.
Next day, my family and i played banana boat, jetsky, and swam in the beach together. And on evening my family and back to villa and rested again. On night my family and i prepared the equipment because on the morning we should went back to home. I was so happy.
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DeleteNama: Rania ARi Puspita
DeleteClass:VIII
School: SMPN 1 SERANG CITY
- iwent to Tanjung Lesung at 10.00AM by car.
It should be: I went to Tanjung Lesung at 10.00AM by car.
-i prepared the clothes.
It should be: I prepared the clothes.
-i sang together.
It should be:I sang together.
-i bought some foods and drinks.
It should be:I bought some foods and drinks.
-i played banana boat,
It should be:I played banana boat,
Name : NurlindaPuspaUtamiPutri
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : SMP Negeri 1 Kota Serang
My Aunt's Birthday
2 months ago. December, 26th 2011. on school holiday. I went to Anyer beach to celebrate My Aunt's Birthday. I went to anyer beach with my father, my mother and my sister by own car.
When I arrived at Anyer beach, I saw my aunt and my big family sat on a sentry box. so i came near to my aunt, said HAPPY BIRTHDAY for her and kissed her cheeks.
After that my aunt opened her event. First event, her husband(my aunt)invited us to prayed for my aunt. after that we sang Happy Birthday song. My aunt blew the candle and cut her Birthday cake and gave that cake part to us. Then i gave her a gift. forth, we ate the food which ordered by my aunt.
After that, We enjoyed the view in Anyer beach. We saw beautiful sunset and heard quite wave. and finally we went back to home.
It was so great holiday for me:)
NAME: PUTRI SEPTIANINGSIH
DeleteCLASS: VIII-B
SCHOOL: 1 JHS SERANG CITY
COMMENT:
1. so i came near to my aunt
it should be : so I came near to my aunt
2. invited us to prayed
it should be :invited us to pray
Name: Aissya Jelitawati
ReplyDeleteClass: 8.B
School: 1 JHS Serang City
Went to Zoo
Last school holiday, my family and I went to Ragunan Zoo to celebrate my brother birthday. We went there at 8.a.m. by car. we arrived in Jakarta at 10.a.m. But we didn't direct to zoo, we went to My Aunt's house first. we would stay there for 3 days.
In my aunt's house, we were rest for several minutes. at 11.a.m we directed to ragunan zoo. there my father bought 5 tickets for us. then, we entered the zoo.
The zoo is so wide. we could see many kinds of animal. the seller and food court were in there too.
First, we visited elephants cage. Then, we visited another animals such as camels, girrafe, monkey, birds, and soon. After we felt tired and the time was 1.p.m, we went to one of restaurant to had lunch. The foods were so delicious. Huh! That time, my stomach was very full of delicious food.
After we had lunc, we continued our trip to visited another animal. we went back to Aunt's house at 4p.p.m. we were very happy for this trip:)
i think SOON " it should be " SO ON
Deleteonly one , maybe . thanks
Name : Fakhri Chairul Akmal
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII
School : SMPN I Kota Serang
My Journey to Yogyakarta
Three years ago my family and I went to Yogyakarta to visit my father’s older brother.This is my first
Time went to Yogyakarta.First we went to Bandung to pick my grandmother,my aunt, and my cousin up.We also stayed for one night here. At the early morning ,after we had “subuh” prayer, we were ready to continue our journey to Yogyakarta. At noon, we ate lunch in one of restaurant in Gombong. The restaurant was near to ricefield so, I could ate the lunch while saw scenic ricefield. We arrived at my uncle’s house in Yogyakarta at night.
In the first day, I and my father went fished in front of my uncle’s house. He has large fish pond with
Various kind of fish. After we got lots of fish , we grilled it for dinner. In the second day, We went to Malioboro .
In there, we bought some traditional clothes and hat,like “batik” and “blankon”. At the same place, we ate “gudeg”,one of specialty here. Suddenly, the weather became drizzle so, We quickly went to home.Next day
We went to Borobudur Temple, the situation was crowded here but I can reached to the top of Borobudur Temple here. We see breathtaking view there. I took lots of picture in Borobudur Temple.
Last day, we were ready to go back home. Before that, we bought souvenir from Yogyakarta such as
Bakpia and yangko. Then we packed the suitcase and we went back home.We went back at noon and arrived
At 3 a.m.It is really unforgettable experience.
Name : Alya Wirahadi Purnama
ReplyDeleteGrade : VIII B
School : SMPN 1 Kota Serang
Went to “Taman Safari”
Last holiday I and My Family went to Taman Safari, we went to Taman Safari by Car, we left from home, at 07.00 AM. We arrived at 11.oo AM.
In Taman Safari I saw many kinds of animals, such as lion, bird, monkey, tiger, etc. In there very interesting with visitors, After we walked around there, we were very tired and hungry. Fortunately, my mother bought the rice, fried chicken, and juice.
After that we back home. We felt very happy. We leaved Taman Safari at 05.00 PM. and arrived at my home was 09.00 PM.
This moment was unforgettable memories because my journey was very interesting.
-After that we back to home
DeleteIt must be : After that we back to home
-In Taman Safari I saw many kinds of animals
It must be : In Taman Safari I saw many kinds of animal
Name : Nindya Syafa A
ReplyDeleteGrade : 8
Fun Trip at Anyer
Last year, my family and my cousins had trip to Anyer. At night, my mother and my aunt, Aunt Nining made plan to went to Anyer with all my cousins. My mother told to us, and we are agree.
On the morning, at five o’clock, we prepared all we need. Clothes, food, etc. My mom is tought the food is most important thing because bought food at Anyer is rather expensive. At half past six, my family picked up my cousins (Lintang, Fafa, Fifi, Timur, Tio). Are you think its became a fun trip ?
Arrived at Anyer, we found the place that there is no sunshine anymore. After that, my father let all cousins to play water on the beach first, then we can ate. Me, my sister, and cousins change our clothes. It’s time for us to swam !!!!! My cousins, me and my sister walked to coral in the side of the beach. Wow, the wave was big and high ! My sister and my mother always remind all for attentive. Beside play water, we took picture went wave came. Very happy and enjoy ! My little cousin, Lintang looked very happy. We had fun together. After play water and took picture, all chidrens change wet clothes. We are had cold, but it was fun. Then, we ate supplies food my mother and my aunt bring, there is rice of course, side dishes, such as, fry fish, chicken, vegetables, mineral water etc. My faher bought ice coconut drink. It was very yummy ! We ate and sometimes laugh and chat
After satisfaction, we back to home. Do you know what I think about this trip?
It was exciting trip forever !!!
Name:Ridho Rivaldo
DeleteClass:VIII
Comment: "After play water" it should be(After played water)
Name : Rachim Chaidir
ReplyDeleteGrade: 8
Holiday in Ragunan Zoo
2 years ago, my family and i went to Ragunan Zoo. We went there by bus. We went to Ragunan Zoo at 07.00 AM and arrived around 09.30 AM. On the way, we had a traffic jam.
In Ragunan Zoo, we saw many lots of people. Beside many peoples on there, there were many animal, likes giraffe, bird, crocodile, monkey and many more.
First,we went to monkey cage. The monkey hanging on the trees. Monkeys usually like to ate bananas. I photographed the monkey hanging on a tree.
Second, we went to giraffe cage. Girrafe neck are very long. Many girrafe are like to ate grasses. Most people fed the girrafe with peanuts.
Last, we went to crocodile cage. I was very scared. The crocodile teeth are very sharp. Crocodiles like to ate meat. My brother photographed the crocodile. After that, we back to home around 04.00 PM.
We were tired but happy. This is my recount, how about us?
Name: Anisa Dhea Nurvita
DeleteClass: VIII
School: SMPN 1 SERANG CITY
-i went to Ragunan Zoo.
It should be: I went to Ragunan Zoo.
-arrived around 09.30 AM.
It should be: arrived around at 09.30 AM.
-we back to home around 04.00 PM.
It should be: we back to home around at 04.00 PM.
Name : Haris Abdul Aziz
ReplyDeleteClass : VIII B
1 Junior High School
Got Accident
Last Sunday I went to ‘rawu’ market with my mother for bought many fish for lunchtime, after we arrived with motorcycle we looked many fish in the market but we confused because so many fish that looked fresh. After seeing many fish we choosed the fish outside the market because the fish outside the market cheaper than inside the market. After we got many fish we went back to home, at lunchtime we cooked the fish, but the weight of fish was not same at market, in market there was 3kg but in my house there are 2kg. We think the seller pettyfogging, then we dissapointed with this accident. There was my accident, how about you?
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DeleteName:Astried Naomi
DeleteClass:8B
JHS 1 Serang
-After we arrived with motorcycle we looked many fish in the market
It should be:After we arrived by motorcycle,we looked many fish in the market
-We confused because so many fish that looked fresh
It should be:We confused because many fish look fresh
-After seeing many fish
It should be:After we saw many fish
-After we got many fish we went back to home
It should be:After we got many fish we go home
-In market there was 3kg but in my house there are 2kg
It should be:in market there were 3kg but in my house there were 2kg
-We think the seller pettyfogging
It should be:We thought the seller pettyfogging